Ok, first off, I haven't had a more intense planned RP-event in SoR than this one, mainly sparked by the conclusion to it. It was over-all great Frakel. I think the PnP approach is not just one thing you can do, it is THE thing, and the more of it in any game, the better. And I appreciate how much effort and preparation you put into this. It felt well-thought through overall.

To answer your questions. Was the plot too thin? No, not really. It was a bit on the light and easy side up until the end, but that was a wise decision on your part. Too much can quickly become.. way too much, especially since this was your first try. Was the plot too thick? No, I don't think so.

Downtime, no. Actually I think this went perfectly, and I hadn't expected chars to pop in and out this quickly. When Perun split from the rest to go to the academy, I had expected nothing to happen, yet I did meet someone there. And when we went quickly to Pyr, there was someone in the bar. Very nice.

The chase worked out, but things happened a little too quickly for me. As in, suddenly one of the Fyros in the bar were gone while my attention drifted from the screen. But that's my own fault The drunken RP was pulled off very nicely by both NPC's, btw.

I don't think there was enough to do for all players, but this is notoriously difficult to get right, particularly in this medium. With a bit more of planning, you could have looked at a role each players char could have taken and made something for them. However, I think you're on your way to doing that, and also did it to a degree. And I think you tried well to get Kyerna into it with the amber. The scope of this event was limited, which as I said was wise. So it's not as if every char would get a lot to do or have too many plot branches. So no big worries I believe.

As for too tight or controlled a plot, again that is wise to have for this first time, making it easier to control and run along in a timely manner. There wasn't too many possibilities for choice or branching before the end, but then there was a MASSIVE possibility for branching. I'm not usually surprised by anything.. Too jaded, seen it all. But this did surprise me

All in all. Very good and even more promising for the future. You have your heart in it, and that's actually the most important thing. But by this I don't mean it was only your heart pulling it through

I love that shot of Kendrus!

And very creepy image of Jez, with the fire. Very, very interesting.

I think those that were actively along had decent interaction. At least, as appropriate to their characters. Kas was there, literally, just to watch over Jez. He was thrilled he got to be as 'active' as he did. To actually stand forward as Jez's guardian. It was also very neat to see.

were do u play this game?